Descriptive Essay and Grammar Review - 96618

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Looking from a distance

Had I utilized multiple draft I believe my essay would have been the best. Looking at the introduction, it was not an attention getter. An introduction that grabs the audience attention can be developed by a good choice of words. Words determine the tone and set the moo